Argument about lollies

Children should eat lollies...	Children should not eat lollies...
1. They love lollies	1. Lollies rot their teeth
2. They taste sweet	2. They could get sick
3. They can be happy	3. They could end up with diabetes
4. Lollies are very cheap	4. They could get too fat
5. They are colourful	5. It has too much sugar and makes kids hyper

Children should not eat lollies:

• Paragraphe 1

Children should not eat lollies because children can get rotten teeth. If you eat too much lollies than that means you could have not much teeth when your older. Also your teeth might break when you eat solid types of food like chocolate, Cookies and lollipops.

• Paragraphe 2

If you eat too much lollies you could get sick. When you're sick that would mean that you need to go to the doctors which I hate. When you're sick you can actually catch many many diseases.

• Paragraphe 3

It is really really sad If you eat way too much sugar because most people can actually get diabetes from heaps of lollies and sugar. Getting diabetes can make you sick also you will need to go to the hospital too. Diabete is so so bad for your body.

• Paragraphe 4  

When sugar enters your body it turns into fat and you can actually get really really fat from sugar. Many people can get obese from heaps and heaps of sugar as you already know that sugar turns into fat well you could die from obesity.

• Paragraphe 5

If your children eat way too much sugar they could get hypo. It is really hard trying to get your kids together when they are hypo. Kids are really difficult when they are hypo. I just hate giving heaps of sugar to kids they don’t listen to you when you tell them what to do.