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Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Mikaiah and Brodies Show Not Tell

Emily overheard Laura on the phone saying that they were going to the mall. Emily, ran into Lauras room saying “can I come can I come” Laura said  “NO you're too young you don’t know what you’re doing. Then suddenly Emily went storming out swearing at her and slammed the door on Laura's face. She locked herself in her room the started punching holes in the wall kicking things around and then left, to calm down.

Emily felt nervous about asking to go to the mall. Emilys heart was pounding as she went in to Laura room her legs started wobbling as she was so nervous she felt like she was gonna pee her pants and when Emily asked to go to the mall with Laura she said “sure i'll take you out for the day”

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